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THE PASSION
OF NINO DE JESUS - Excerpt from "Follow Your Dream" by Dean Borok
The
Passion of Nino De Jesus
Dean Borok
[Scenario: Niño de Jesus Benitez has escaped from the
mental hospital on Ward's Island and made his way to Hell's Kitchen
on the West Side of Manhattan, where he goes to the object of all
his dreams and desires, a garishly-painted fuchia forklift truck
parked in a vacant lot]
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Niño
de Jesus frequently had marveled at it on his way to work and one day,
when the proprietor had left the gate unlocked, he snuck in for a closer
look. Climbing up the ladder on the side and peering into the control
booth, he noticed that they had left the key in the ignition. After
all, one might reason, who would steal such a monster? Only a crazy
man!
From that day forward the machine became a constant landmark of his
scattered emotional terrain. The idea of it would pop up when he was
riding the subway into town from his rented room in Corona, when he
was eating beans and rice in the shared kitchen of his boarding house,
when he was watching Mexican gangster movies showing smartly tailored
guys with mustaches smattering each other into fragments with machine
guns.
If the average person is distracted by thoughts of sex every eight seconds
as scientists contend, then Niño de Jesus Benitez, who had not
the slightest interest in any form of human contact, who was a fanatical
Catholic fundamentalist sober or drunk, had found the ideal vehicle
of transferal for all his earthly animal tendencies. The fuchsia forklift
took over all his waking thoughts and dreams. He changed his commute
so that he could pass it twice each day, crossing himself and uttering
a devotional prayer on his way to and from his job as (what else?) a
forklift operator.
The fuchsia forklift came to have a deleterious effect on his job performance
at the industrial bakery where he worked. His previously close relationship
with the dependable little yellow forklift that he drove became strained,
the same way a man might devalue his plain but faithful wife after becoming
infatuated with a younger, lovelier woman. He began treating her with
contempt and insouciance, letting her battery water run low and forgetting
to recharge her when he went on break or ended his shift. Sometimes,
out of spite, he intentionally banged her against concrete surfaces,
damaging her fiberglass body and exposing her insides. Occasionally
he would drive her around without first raising her fork, causing sparks
to fly as the prongs scraped painfully across the reinforced cement
floor. The yellow forklift, which was named Teresa since its last driver
had painted his childs name on it, sadly deteriorated from her
previously spunky self and now dripped tears of hydraulic fluid as she
dragged herself forlornly about the premises. Finally, the loading dock
foreman, Bolivar Marticorena, took notice and stepped in to champion
her.
Its a crime the way you abuse this machine, he asserted.
Why dont you go to hell! retorted Niño de Jesus
with the defensive indignation of somebody who knows perfectly well
he is being justly accused.
Whether Bolivar was right or wrong was beside the point. Niño
de Jesus knew the Mexican foreman had it in for him because he was from
Ecuador. Besides, he knew Bolivars hideous secret, that he was
a demon from the depths of hell who had ascended into the world by way
of a stairway behind the furnace in the sub-basement of the factory,
a filthy, hellish place where the slops from the drainage system fell
into a slop sink which connected it to the citys sewer system.
Niño de Jesus sometimes went down there because the foul odor
kept others away, and he could get some peace and quiet while he sipped
from a pint bottle of Ronrico to steady his nerves. As the old saying
goes, once you get past the smell youve got it licked, and Niño
de Jesus passed many agreeable solitary moments there, alone except
for the occasional water bug or garden variety rodent.
That is, until the day when he heard whistling, chuckling voices coming
from behind the giant hundred year-old furnace in a dark corner, towering
like a steel mountain behind a blackened lagoon of a cesspool of shiny
sewage and putrefied rat carcasses. Intrigued, he squeezed his skinny
body into the narrow passage separating the furnace from the wall until
he had gotten behind it. There was a solid green door. He tried the
handle, but it was locked.
The voices behind the door had gone silent when they heard somebody
trying the handle. There was total silence for several seconds, when
suddenly a terrifying chorus of howls and screams startled and frightened
Niño de Jesus. Panicked, he tried to scramble back through the
narrow passage from which he had come, but in his haste he snagged part
of his clothing on a piece of metal protruding from the furnace. Unable
to move, he heard the voices come right up behind him, mocking him and
threatening him in unknown languages of gibberish. Disembodied faces
spun around in the air, laughing and menacing as Niño de Jesus,
soaked in sweat and praying to Jesus for salvation from these infernal
spirits who, enraged that he had discovered their hiding place, now
laughingly taunted and threatened him with destruction and the loss
of his immortal soul.
He passed out, hanging there like a marionette in this dark, stinking
subterranean pit of filth and demons for an immeasurable period of time.
Once he woke up to find giant water bugs crawling all over his clothing
and body, sucking the salt perspiration. At the end of the short passage,
rats stuck their heads in curiously, wondering how long it would take
for him to die there so they could begin eating him. Passing out again,
he retreated into a dream state of delirium.
At length, he was discovered by the old man, Tato, whose job in the
factory it was to search out and kill bugs and rodents, for which purpose
he carried with him a little tin first-aid case that he called his maleta
de muerte, stuffed as it was with the traps and poisons that were
his instruments of destruction. He would assemble all the little dead
critters he had collected during his shift in a white bakery bag and
show them to his boss as proof of his indispensability to the company.
His manager, a hardened man of fifty, might very well be biting into
a sandwich at the time of such an exhibition, where a glance into the
bag would transport him into another little unique dimension of hell,
one of water bugs stuck to glue traps, their shells and wings in disarray,
many still alive with antennae furiously thrashing about; maggot-ridden
corpses of mice stuck to traps with blood flowing out of their mouths
and laying in their own droppings. Muy bueno, the manager
would tell the old man as he chewed his sandwich. And he meant it. Tato,
with his small body and unabashed enthusiasm for squeezing into dark
corners of the factory, flashlight in hand, performed an invaluable
function. The manager, although repelled by this little menagerie of
loathsome filth, was nevertheless heartened by the knowledge that none
of these animals would contaminate the food product or, even more horribly,
intrude their pointy little heads during a factory tour by customers
or a government inspection. Youre doing a fine job,
he would compliment the little man in fluent, though heavily anglo-inflected
Spanish. Get out there and kill some more! The old man,
elated by this encouragement, would recommence with renewed ardor.
Tato found Niño de Jesus Benitez suspended in the narrow passage
behind the furnace, his clothes tangled in the machinery, and helped
cut him free with a box cutter. After he had cut him loose, the toothless
old man cautioned Niño de Jesus in barely comprehensible Spanish,
Never go there. There are bad things.
This episode had a major impact on Niño de Jesus mind,
and he started going down to the sub-basement on a regular basis, not
to nip the bottle but to monitor the activity behind the furnace. In
the silence, punctuated only by the gurgling and plopping of the rancid,
filthy factory waste water flowing through the drainage pipe into the
slop sink, he could make out the sounds coming from the green door at
the end of the narrow passage, the infernal whistling and chuckling
of rats mixed with human voices shrilly screaming and the shouts and
pleadings of tortured souls being impaled on spikes, branded with red-hot
pokers, having their eyes gouged out.
Armed with this knowledge, Niño de Jesus Benitez came to develop
a clear understanding of the events of September 11, which, though having
occurred many years before, were still the major preoccupation of New
York society. He came to realize that the buildings collapse,
while precipitated by the airplanes having collided into them, actually
resulted from fissures in the earths crust caused by aliens burrowing
underneath them and weakening their foundations.
Niño de
Jesus, straining to hear, could distinguish over the roar of the furnace
and the rushing flop of sewage into the slop sink the barely audible
moans and pleas of priests who, stripped naked and chained to posts,
bleeding and sweating, their pathetic moans and pleas for mercy and
salvation drowned out by the hellish baritone laughter of the lesbians,
were flagellated unmercifully with barbed wire cat o nine tails
whips.
He decided to alert a priest, Father Guzman, a saintly man who ministered
to the unfortunate Central American undocumented aliens out of St. Anthonys
Parish in Corona. Father Guzman listened sympathetically to Niño
de Jesus description of the events taking place behind the green
door and wrote him a referral for psychiatric counseling, which Niño
de Jesus immediately tore up after leaving the priests office.
If they think theyre going to get me, theyre crazy!
© Dean Borok October 2007
RIP
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